I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I was really impressed with the analysing A because you set it up really good because it was easy to read and you put animated pics and with a cat crying. Next time you could try doing Evaluation B where you explain if it could happen in real life and why or why not. BY Tekatiti
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Great work keep it up. I love Huskies there one of my favourite breed of dog.
ReplyDeleteI was really impressed with the analysing A because you set it up really good because it was easy to read and you put animated pics and with a cat crying.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could try doing Evaluation B where you explain if it could happen in real life and why or why not.
BY Tekatiti